AppraisalA Story by Haim KadmanAn excerpt of the novel AN AFRICAN SUNSET.Appraisal An African Sunset An excerpt Shatz sat sullen and stiff licking his wounds, back in the front seat
next to Everon, The delegation's head boastful behavior and that particular way
of his, of binding together scorn and praise were a bitter revelation as far as
Shatz was concerned. In an effort to avoid an undesirable harsh reaction,
particularly after the ambassador's long and boring lecture they both had, he
kept his mouth strictly shut. 'If he has disappointed you in some way or another, or if you were left
with some poor impressions, you had better shake these thoughts off.' Everon advised
him as soon as he settled himself in his own seat, and without waiting for
Shatz answer he switched on the engine and set off towards the main road. 'He doesn't possess a charismatic personality I do agree, but he's
absolutely the most liberal person I've ever worked with. He is involved in
some complicated issue which keeps troubling him ceaselessly; one can read his
worries on his face, the poor man.' Everon added thoughtfully, watching the
road ahead, as if he were talking to himself.
'He's a widower our dear ambassador and the offsprings of his first
marriage, were left behind back home; four of them, mind you. It must be a
heavy burden on his conscious, no doubt. Down here he brought with him his
brand new wife, he married her a month or so before they left for his post here
in Mouaka. Just as you have caught up with your French.' Everon added laughing.
'Well she isn't the type that would make men turn their heads round to have
another look at her, while crossing the street; but in any case, the difference
of age between them isn't expressed in appearances alone. There are some more
conspicuous aspects one can't ignore. Every time some guest compliments or
flatters her in his presence, he swallows a frog the poor fellow. Now, try to
imagine what would happen if a dark skin celebrity, one of our sensitive
locals, will make a pass at her, ' Everon burst out in a hilarious wild laugh thumping
the steering wheel with both his hands, and sweeping Shatz along with him.
'I say, he might get completely out of his mind one of these days.' Everon's knack to reveal the ridiculous aspects in every possible state
of affairs, and no doubt in every person; the carefree humor with which he
referred to the ambassador has improved Shatz's spirits, from one extreme mood
right to another. He is okay! Shatz told himself smiling back
to Everon. The first impression he had of Everon, must have been correct after
all. He did not share Everon's views on the ambassador, nor did he feel a need to
contradict Everon’s certain views about him. He simply did not like to perceive
himself in his mind's eye, as such a wavered old nag in the thirty or more
years to come. 'No, this certain situation isn't easy at all.' Everon continued his
endless monologue, in his thoughtful style. 'He's under a constant stress, and
how heavy that stress is you can't even imagine. It strikes him from every possible direction.
Apart from the usual diplomatic headaches, receptions, and the rest of it,
there're enough troubles within our own circle... His young wife has her own
bright and original ideas, Peleg has his aspirations; and the Priels mind you,
are sending home to a particular address, letters soaked and oozing with
bitterness and that's just the tip of the iceberg... In short there's no need
to dig too deep, all one has to do is just scrape the surface a bit.’ Everon pushed the accelerator down as hard as he could, as if it was his
second nature. Thus the way back to the Mouaka seemed a rather short journey.
When they reached the hotel's parking lot, neither of them could have felt an
urgent need to take leave of each other and part, the night was still young. 'Prepare yourself to your first assignment; you're buying me a drink.'
Everon declared smiling his sly smile. He led Shatz to the bar's terrace, leaving
the car and his attaché case, which was thrown on the rear seat behind
them.
'Well, you can't imagine how things are being run over here. There are at least three captains at the helm
except the authorized one with hardly any crew, and the ship is a nutshell...
Funny isn't it, how poetry inspires me in this forlorn hole.' He added laughing
quietly. Haim Kadman 1989 " all rights
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StatsAuthorHaim KadmanPetach-Tikva, IsraelAboutProfile: A few words about myself: being a native of a small country whose waist is seventeen kilometers wide in a certain area; and in seven to eight hours drive one can cross its length, I was amaze.. more..Writing
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