Craving

A love poem

He missed her terribly.

~She was hardly gone,

and he already~

~craved for her sight,

for her voice,~

~her fascinating smile,

her sweet laughter;~

~no less than he craved

for the supple~

~young ivory skin

of her young body.

© Haim Kadman the 21st Century �" all rights reserved.

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Lovely Haim..yes the voice touches the heart and soul as well as everything when missing someone...nicely done...Rose

[Haim Kadman]

I've tried to describe feelings of love and thanks to your comment I believe I've managed in a way... Thnnds again dear Roae for your kind comment.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

...missing her completely.

Beautiful and sad.

[Haim Kadman]

As a very young I wasn't able to compliment a woman or descrive orally my true feelings, it took me time. Thnaks so much ShimmeingBliss.

[Marie]

Indeed, she must have been all things to him.

[Haim Kadman]

That's the right conclusion Marie and thank so much