Coffee

Coffee

A Poem by Harrisen Viator
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I drink too much coffee.

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Oh Coffee,
you wonderful liquid,
you're always there
to keep me buzzing
late at night
when an assignment is due the next day.

Oh Coffee,
you terrible friend,
your reminders
when you're not around
bring pain in the morning,
but of all things to be addicted to, at least you're not meth.

© 2013 Harrisen Viator


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What if you could personify coffee more? He is a terrible friend- what does he look like? How does he greet you? How does he say goodbye? Why do you love someone so unreliable?

I'm reading some of your poems and I like this one best so far because it's about something that I can picture. I don't know a ton about poetry, but I always like when words spur images in my mind.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harrisen Viator

7 Years Ago

You do make a good point. I could have made it more appealing and done a more affective job at descr.. read more



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I think this is a creative way to describe our good friend coffee
bring pain in the morning-great way to describe it really
descriptive little write
love that last line*)
thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harrisen Viator

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your review Holly!
I did try to show my own relationship with coffee, and how it.. read more
What if you could personify coffee more? He is a terrible friend- what does he look like? How does he greet you? How does he say goodbye? Why do you love someone so unreliable?

I'm reading some of your poems and I like this one best so far because it's about something that I can picture. I don't know a ton about poetry, but I always like when words spur images in my mind.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harrisen Viator

7 Years Ago

You do make a good point. I could have made it more appealing and done a more affective job at descr.. read more

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Harrisen Viator

Dallas, TX



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