Jumbled

I just feel so uninspired

I can't seem to write

very many words anymore,

tonight's not my night

my brain is at war.

I'm fighting so hard

the things I must do,

my mind must be lard

the thoughts are askew.

If I only finish

the stress will surely leave, 

my anguish will vanish

and self-esteem I'll achieve.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think about it. I just wrote it.

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

I know the feeling. Of those days when you can't do anything and you feel completely useless. I have those a lot more than ever. Great write.

[Harrisen Viator]

Yeah, I hate that feeling, that's why I wrote this one. I just try to keep as active as possible and that helps out a lot. Thank you :)

[A.E. Surdam]

You are most welcome.

[Baby Ricochet]

I've written several of these "I can't come up with crap" pieces and this one's good so Great Job. Cheers

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you! Your review is greatly appreciated!
-Harrisen

[Ees]

Really nicely done.
I think sometimes it is good when inspiration only comes in burst though. Forced poetry usually doesn't seem worth as much as something that just springs forth and needed to be written.
All that said, this was really well done. You did a fantastic job with the moment here!
I particularly enjoyed the two lines that ended in lard/askew. Nice choices with your words!
Great job!

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you!
Yeah I only wish my inspiration would go to the actual work that I need to get done.. I'm glad that you enjoyed this though! :)

[Ees]

Haha. Those pesky muses never work that way! But maybe your inspiration is focused on what you need to get done for life rather than assignments which often matter for little more than a damn grade.

[Harrisen Viator]

Haha, yeah that sounds like something that would happen to me..
Except that this is a big letter grade, but oh well I'll get it done.

[Ees]

You'll get it done.
But what the hell is a grade other than a means to get to graduation anyway? lol. just my silly little rebellious streak trying to pollute your education prob...

[Harrisen Viator]

Haha I can't have that I'm trying to get to law school eventually..

[Ees]

I'll try to keep my pollution away.