Blank Pages

Blank pages feed my soul,

let go and breathe the flow.

Sow the seed and seek the whole,

when it's over reap the growth.

Light the tunnels and the caves

don't you fumble brain waves;

face the struggle rumble hate

'cause you're someone made great.

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

I like the way you write
"Light the tunnels and the caves"

face the struggle rumble hate
'cause you're someone made great.

Such a thought provoking message in a few lines. Great job! :)

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you! Usually I say the lines out loud while I'm writing, so that's probably why the rhymes aren't always as tight when read, but I'm glad that you were able to get something from it and that you enjoyed it :)

[Nicole Williams]

this is pretty cool
though i understand it, some of the rhymes seem a little forced
but its still a nicely written poem. ^___^ Good job

[Harrisen Viator]

Yeah, I guess I should work on my rhyming a bit. I'm glad you enjoyed it though! :D

[Nicole Williams]

:D no problem, that's why i rarely rhyme in any of my poems. i seriously suck at it lol

[Harrisen Viator]

Yeah, that's the problem with songwriting, I start writing poems and they don't rhyme the same way when you read them :P