Day of the dead

God always takes the very best

Today he took you away

He set you seperate from the rest.

Oh how i wish you could stay.

Reviews

[TheBandit]

I love the length of this
And it's straightforward
And it's an extremely relatable feeling
Beautiful in it's simplicity and brevity

[Coyote Poetry]

A hidden story in this poem. It seem the good people leave us too soon. You said a lot in so few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote