Simple Loss

Simple Loss

A Poem by holly
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The sculpture is by Richard Reed and sits on my brother's property. Dick is his fine son.

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Tall as scrub pine,

 

Eagle cuts too-spiced air:

 

Simple estrangement.

© 2010 holly


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Have.ypu ever tried your.hand at hiakus??

Poeticme

Posted 4 Years Ago


Enjoyed this short but very deep poem, you captured that one from​ your very soul my lady, thanks for sharing this lovely write

Poeticme

Posted 4 Years Ago


and I wonder today if loss is really ever simple . . .

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like, Eagle cuts too-spiced air, very strong!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Comparative and interpretive. I like the progression of thought.

Posted 10 Years Ago


tall as scrub pine, that is tall

simplicity is often enough

Posted 10 Years Ago


see a fool times two
who has nothing else to do
estranged from you


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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