FLY AWAY

Look at the author's note :P

Things will come
Things will change
And things will go away

Trying to find
Finding them is a waste.
Trying to overcome
Trying to fly
Trying to fly away

If you knew my life
Is different from yours
If you knew my life
You would change
If you only knew
If you only heard
If you only saw
What my life is about
What my life is about

Finding them..
Trying to overcome...
Trying to fly.....
Fly away....

Author's Note

This is NOT a poem.

Feedback is appreciated. :D

Reviews

[Dark Rider]

Even though this isn't a poem, it's pure poetry. Who don't have to go into detail to try to figure out what you are trying to say with this. And even though you siad this as noting to do with your life, I think almost everyone has felt like this at least once in their life when things have gotten pretty bad. I know I have. Great job, Hidden.

[Dark Rider]

Lol, no problem, Hidden.

[~Dragon X]

Hehe, wow, this was nice! ^^

I am personally awful at writing song lyrics...XD....I APPLAUD THEE! 8D

[Forever Hidden]

LOL THANK YOU! XD

[~Dragon X]

Hehe no problem, I really liked this piece. 83 Keep writing! XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

You need a title?
Great song. Id put in a rock beat. Not heavy though. Good job

[Forever Hidden]

Yeah. I just decided to name it SonG for now XD
It's suppose to be a light song :)
I've never in my life put a rock beat in any of the songs I wrote so it would be hard for me XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

Light song? Hmmm.... like a soft rock them. Like..... some of tom petty or bob seger. It could work!! Hm. Title.... trying to fly? Fly away? If only? If you knew? If?

[Forever Hidden]

FLY AWAY!!!! Great title!!!!!! YOUR MY LIFESAVER FOR THIS SONG XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

I didn't do anything. It was already in the song I just pointed it out

[Forever Hidden]

Oh well. You helped at least

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its also great its in light blue cuz it reminds me of the sky

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nice