Jalcom's Cane

Jalcom's Cane

A Book by Michelle Earl

The story of a man's journey to a country called Ludor to bring home his betrothed. What he finds and goes through changes him forever


© 2008 Michelle Earl

Author's Note

Michelle Earl
This is the first draft.

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Well, this certainly made me curious about the rest of the story....Will there be more?

I like the little tidbits of information that we get about the characters: "Copy the picture you made of me and tack it to the place where you are staying." Is his lover an artist?

This would be a nice prologue for a novel or short story. As far as polishing...I don't see anything in the narrative that really hung me up. So, good job. I'm sure that with some tweaking you could easily get the story to the place you want it to be.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 9, 2008


Michelle Earl
Michelle Earl

Edmonton , Alberta, Canada

Michelle Earl lives in Edmonton Alberta Canada along with her husband and fish. She writes primarily fantasy with a Christian slant and poetry, although she is thinking of writing a cookbook someday... more..