Welcome To Hell

You're stuck here in the land of the damned.

Did the Earth open wide
and swallow you whole?
Did you pass on with ease
or was there a toll?
Did you give up your life
or was it stolen?
Did you fall to pieces
or were you already broken?
Did you ever see truth
or were you wrapped up in lies?
Did you beg for forgiveness
or have you already tried?
Did you deny all your sins
or did you want to come in?
No matter your answers
You’re stuck here now
In the land of the damned
Welcome to Hell.

Author's Note

I had nothing to do after an English test so this came about. :3

Reviews

[Melissa Kesead]

I love the flow and it's a fun write!

[John McGrael]

hahahaha, i wrote my poem "soldier's dreams" exactly the same way....
after an english test!!

anyways, ur an amazingly talented writer

and i love this poem too

[Mrs.Lovett]

Wow, very cool. I like it. =)

[Winter Poison]

...That's lovely. XD Nice. I like it.

[Marlena]

I love the ending XD Great job, though I think "Did you ever see truth
or were wrapped up in lies?" shouldn't it be "or were you wrapped up in lies?" ? Sorry XD I love this though, especially the ending, one of my faves from you!