This Dance Floor Will Be Our Stage

This Dance Floor Will Be Our Stage

A Poem by Lexi Nicole

Teenage hearts beat faster, faster. Music pounding louder, louder.


Teenage hearts beat
Faster, faster
Music pounding
Louder, louder
Raise your hands
And swing your hips
Strobe lights blinking
Faster, faster
Teenage voices sing
Louder, louder
Take my hand
Take me away
This dance floor
Will be our stage

© 2009 Lexi Nicole

Author's Note

Lexi Nicole
....This is really just my procrastination on making sweet sixteen invitations. Comments and crit would be lovely :3

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Nice flow
I like the beat in it
Good luck with the invitations =)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Wow.. really nice.. great flow.. short but full of action! It's fresh and makes me want to go out dancing right now!!! Love the picture as it sure makes the setting for this.. if you enter a contest .. hope you win! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Did you submit this into the Music and Dance contest?

Posted 14 Years Ago

I love it!!
I really like dancing and this is what its all about.
awesome !!

Posted 14 Years Ago

I like this. It's fun, and has a beat to it. I can imagine some Blaqk Audio-esque music going with this. Very fun to read. And I'm sure you had a great time writing it!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Kind of reminds me of that panic at the disco song that came out a while ago, I like it tho XD

Posted 14 Years Ago

Chaotic and full of life. This is really cute.

Posted 14 Years Ago

so sweet and so fresh!!!!
full of motion!!!
btw good luck with your sweet sixteen invitations!!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Lexi Nicole
Lexi Nicole


Live. Love. Write. I'm 20 years old. I've been writing since I was 4. Writing is more than just a hobby. It's my passion, my drug, my therapy and my life. iaintbegginw.. more..


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