A sound of splashing

A sound of splashing (haiku)

A sound of splashing

Cushioned by tranquility

A mariners song

Author's Note

Comments and criticisms welcome

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the ruckus of the splashing juxtaposed to the tranquility of life...that perfect balance.

j.

[hcarson]

Love that, when its quiet but u hear water..relaxing..so long as it isnt the dripping of a tap lol, thank u so much for your comment much appreciated

[Inject Positivity]

Superb again with the concept... This is another beautiful work... Just wondering whether you meant mariner's song or am I thinking the wrong way lol... But it's amazing...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[hcarson]

I did, thank u for pointing it out to me, very grateful 😁 u invaluable as always