Dark Lies

Dark Lies

A Poem by ~Blue Fantasy~
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A dark world built by your lies.

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Dark Lies

 

Lost in the cold, a dark world built by your lies.

For you who built it, they are your disguise.

 

You believe the lies you say.

You hate the light and hate all righteous.

And play your evil games.

 

For evil has overtaken you

And you don’t seem to care.

You grow darker and darker deep in despair.

 

Your mind will break left for torment to overtake.

You listen to the voice in the dark, for now, it is in your heart.

© 2011 ~Blue Fantasy~


Author's Note

~Blue Fantasy~
This is a true story. I like to write about happy stuff....but this has been on my mind.

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This is a natural continuation of
Severed Lives, even darker evil present.
You might amplafy the meaning of truth
in the second paragraph. Truth , as I`m sure
you are aware is not universal. It means one
thing to the injured and quite another thing
to the 'user".
Excellent writing with an expression of despair
and worthlessness.
More please.
---- Eag;eCruagh


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 5, 2011
Last Updated on October 2, 2011
Tags: dark, lies, disguise, cold, evil, games, despair, torment, voice, heart

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~Blue Fantasy~
~Blue Fantasy~

Sweet Home, AL



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I am a married mother of three children. Life is always busy, but at the end of the day I always feel very blessed! I have a strong passion to write. I enjoy writing poetry silly and serious! My ch.. more..

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