To those who are harsh

I may not
Be David Bowden
My word may not
Flow as amazing
As his
He is a talented
Poet however
I am a mere
Amature poet
I love God
I try have my pen
And my words
Be a servant to the Lord
I know to most
My poetry is just nonsense
I know most people
Think my poetry runs on
And has no meaning
But I try
I want to be a poet
Just like David Bowden
And I understand I have a long
Ways to go to be a good poet

Reviews

[Pete]

Your faith and passion are evident. Don't worry about the polish of the poetry. It speaks and has a lot to say. Keep writing.

[child of God]

Thank you sir