My queen, My love

A story of a fairy queen's assasination told from the point of view of agoras the queens protective knights

Her skin like silver,

her eye's like water,

her beauty beyond compair,

my queen, my love.

 

The sky went black,

as the gate guard came in,

and as fast as he did,

he yelled help then died,

 

We rushed into action,

my queen's loyal protection,

we looked into yonder,

and saw the archer.

 

Like silver in the air,

the arrow came through our gaze,

we all turned to confirm,

it had killed the queen.

 

 

Reviews

[Murtuza]

Well depicted. Nice job!

[c.m.]

I really like this. In some ways, your punctuation is a bit off. But whose to say you don't intend it that way? :) I love the "my queen, my love" line. Nice job.