My Worst Enemy

My Worst Enemy

A Chapter by Slender Smile/Husna Tayyab
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Sarah Catherine Bellham is strong spirited and takes life very seriously.Vincent Abraham Pal is ruthless, rude and a rascal.What happens when these two are forced into a relationship?Will they get out of it together or will they destroy each other?

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I got a mail earlier today with the details.
 

 

Full name: Sarah Christiana Bellham

Birth Date: 14 Oct, 1988
 
Favorite Color: Baby Pink
 
 
Loves roses.
 
Crazy about cats. Has a pet named‘Kiera’.
 
Is a vegetarian.
 
 
She is doing her psychology in University of San Francisco, California.
 
 
Stays in an apartment with her friend Anna Cruise.
 
 
Her day starts around 6:00 AM.
 
Jogs everyday about 10 Kms to and fro the apartment, gets ready for the
college and leaves.
 
 
Works in a book shop ‘The Book point’ in the evening after college.
 
An elderly lady of about 80 years, a certain Ms. Elizabeth Stuart is her boss.
 
 
Works till the closing time and then walks back to the apartment.
 
 
That’s the end of her day.
 
 
Weekends- She doesn’t seem to have anything to do except to go the store for the grocery shopping.
 
 
At present she is in Hawaii for a conference and will be back by weekend.
 

 

Boring!

How could a person live like that?
 
 
I am sure she is some sort of a nerd always with her books, very uptight about everything.
 
 
Someone should teach her to let her hair down and enjoy life.
 
And, that would definitely not be me!
 
 
I wonder why it was that he could get her boss’s photograph but not hers.
 
 
My sources say that I’ll be getting a mail with the latest photograph of hers this evening.
 
That means it’ll be waiting now in my mailbox for me to open.
 
 
That reminds me: I have to leave this place and get some air and peace.
 
I looked around.
 
 
Everyone was busy and so would hardly notice my absence.
 
 
I quietly made my way towards the exit.
 
 
“Leaving already?” I head the sharp, taunting voice and stiffened.
 
 
How could I have forgotten that I wouldn’t get my peace that easily?!
 
 
I turned around.
 
 
There stood Benjamin Pal, my brother and my worst enemy ever…!


© 2009 Slender Smile/Husna Tayyab


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Does not sound like this guy is very nice? And how fdid he get all that info on the girl.........lol

I saw a few spacing mistakes like.......

"Everyonewas busy and sowould hardly notice my absence."

should be............

"Everyone was busy and should hardly notice my absence."

Besides that the chapter was great! I have enjoyed it so far.

Kelley

and........

"How could Ihave forgotten thatI wouldn't get my peacethat easily?!"

should be.......

"How could I have forgotten that? I wouldn't get my peace that easily?!"

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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This guy does sound unplesant!
I like this and i am intrigued so far
this is very interesting.
I like your charcters they seem
very realistic.



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So far so good. :)
Will be interesting to learn exactly what this guy's "sources" are.

On to the next chapter! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Does not sound like this guy is very nice? And how fdid he get all that info on the girl.........lol

I saw a few spacing mistakes like.......

"Everyonewas busy and sowould hardly notice my absence."

should be............

"Everyone was busy and should hardly notice my absence."

Besides that the chapter was great! I have enjoyed it so far.

Kelley

and........

"How could Ihave forgotten thatI wouldn't get my peacethat easily?!"

should be.......

"How could I have forgotten that? I wouldn't get my peace that easily?!"

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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I'm intrigued. Waiting for more! : )

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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