The Curse of Indifference

Sobriety sucks,

I'll tell you that

This bottle of coke 

Only brings out the cold

That terrifies my head

I wasn't even supposed to be home tonight

These words should've never been put together

But now there's no need to foresight

What could've been

Won't really make things better

It happened again

Confirming what I already know

Everybody is affected

As I appear to have no soul

There's a darkness inside of me

A very confused one might I add

It has yet to realise its negative aspect

The evil refuses to show its face

Therefore I'm neither good or bad

Just another vacuum among space

I've been told it can be seen from my eyes

There's no mirror in my room

So I can live with all my lies

The thing that really bugs me is knowing

Somethings inside, it's just not showing

Not entirely broken in theory

But also not right

This middle ground is killing my hability to fight.

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

Really liked the wording of your last line " hability" well done my friend.

[Kimiko Watson]

this is indeed a wonderful piece

[Coyote Poetry]

The words had a honest tone and I liked the directness and the thoughts.
"As I appear to have no soul
There's a darkness inside of me"
Quitting a need will keep us off balance. I liked the above lines. Most of us have hidden darkness. Make us who we are. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

wow,many can relate to this powerful write

[Somu]

nice poem...so close to heart....i really appreciate your good work. and if you got some time check some of mine too.

[hypochondrita]

thank you. I will.