Eviction

Taking responsability for yourself.

Hi.

I knew you'd come.

Take a seat.

I have a proposition for you.

I'll let you leave.

You get release, I get some peace.

I'll put you in these words

I'll cry you out.

I'll scream until I'm out of air

I'll go beyond what I can bear.

There's not any room left

to fit you and I.

So you do what you do best

Paint me as the bad guy.

Must be a lot of fun

Never being the responsible one.

You know, It took me a while 

to realise we were the same

So I could also be that vile

Shift the blame.

Defeat the shame.

Revert the game.

It's all mine now

Close the door on your way out.

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This narrator comes across to me as being so angry, so bitter, & so vindictive, as a reader, I assume this person is the problem, not the other way around, as the narrator may want to convince us. Whenever one person excessively blames another person for a bad relationship, this is a big red flag. We all make our choices & share in the blame for our results. I hate this narrator & the uppity attitude. But the best writing provokes a reaction & that's why you've succeeded with flying emotion! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like this poem.
"It's all mine now
Close the door on your way out."
The above lines is wisdom. We make our messes and we must live in the s**t we create. I liked the honest tine leading to the proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

strong emotional write,great job