The First Song

The First Song

A Poem by i'mHiding

funny how i never thought you cared
when really it was just a dare
to make me laugh and try so hard 
your the only joker card
your smile was a deep infection,
but you had my deep affection 
killing time for all to see 
but i still doubted you loved me
and now i'm gone, can't have you back
have you attack, what i had left in my own heart
but you don't care, tore me apart,
is that so fair?
i've given all i have to him 
and your are healing as i bend,
i wilt, i wither in this mistake,
but haven't forgot you to this day.
Your the hero of my dreams, 
the salted and the bittersweet,
you like the heroine in my veins 
the nightmare that my midnight craves
A boy a girl, a grave mistake,
forced away and i can't take,
this feeling like somethings missing, 
my life is missing,
everything's nothing, without you.

© 2010 i'mHiding

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Wow. This is deep... Full of emotion, and I can totally relate to everything written here... Beautiful language used... :)

Isn't life a b***h? >.<

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Added on February 28, 2010
Last Updated on February 28, 2010



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