21 words.

21 words.

A Poem by i.am.the.sun.
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this was originally 22 words for one contest, and has been reworked to fit 3 lines, 7 word max per lines for another contest.

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When you leave I am left standing
alone, thinking that sometimes I just wish
it would take forever to say goodbye.

© 2016 i.am.the.sun.


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Added on March 12, 2011
Last Updated on April 11, 2016
Tags: short, contest, three, three lines, 21 words, goodbye, wishing, 21, alone, standing

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i.am.the.sun.
i.am.the.sun.

Burnaby, Thugz mansion, Canada



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