1000%

1000%

A Poem by i.am.the.sun.

a text is little compared to an email, 
where you really have room to say something.
even better is a hand written letter,
with all the scribbles and stains
and faded coffee dribbles.
which in turn is little compared to a call,
where you can hear the trembles 
and the nuances,
in the voice of the person
who thought it would be nice to hear yours...

better yet is a conversation
with the person in front of you,
face to face,
mouth to mouth,
and skin to skin.
with thoughts flowing, glowing,
off the tips of tongues
like two twin transcending waterfalls
cascading together to make lake him and her.
them.
us.
we.

and when words arent available...
a kiss will do...
a kiss will do with so much love from me to you
and you to me
that it's all i'll need to know i am where i'm supposed to be,
inside of me,
next to you.
and if you dont get this,
read this,
hear this, feel this,
or know this even exists
i want you to know one thing...

there's a kiss for you,
there's a kiss for you on the edge of my lips
and it wont go anywhere
untill i see your swinging hips
as you walk my way.

and that kiss on the edge of my lips that wont go anywhere until i see your swinging hips will be there because you're mine and i love you. 
and what's mine is yours and yours is mine.
and if you're 100% mine girl,
then i'm 1000% yours...

© 2011 i.am.the.sun.


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This is so sweet. I like the thought written here, about text messages and emails. Sometimes they really stink, it's much nicer to talk face to face or on the phone! I find anyways.
A good twist, how it swings into romance! You can tell the girl is special to you! Great write!
100/100



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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So very sweet and cute, but true. You should always give your 100% to someone, and you portray this well, great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this.. an excellent write.. :) x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I.....almost......cried!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

extremely truthful and vulnerable poem! I love it, very well written and a lot of thought an emotion is put in.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet. I like the thought written here, about text messages and emails. Sometimes they really stink, it's much nicer to talk face to face or on the phone! I find anyways.
A good twist, how it swings into romance! You can tell the girl is special to you! Great write!
100/100



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 12, 2011
Last Updated on March 25, 2011
Tags: love, wanting, needing, asking, a letter, letter, conversation, talking

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i.am.the.sun.

Burnaby, Thugz mansion, Canada



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