Poem 3.15

Poem 3.15

A Poem by Belle

Foolish I was,  to have

looked in the mirror of your soul

dove into your core  

swayed into your sweet song

 

Foolish I was, to have  

made mine self  a crystalline

let you conquered my domain

allowed  you to marry my mind

 

Now,  all that foolishness

all that absurdities of mine

are bringing me back on the brink

on the brink of endless darkness

 


Foolish I was, to have

once more believed

in Odysseus and Penelope

 

            I forgot to remember 

            that love --

            Love seldom stays.


© 2013 Belle


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Very Good work. Pen On. Do u read mine to Time, Anguish and Why?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marvelous! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


beautiful, beautiful!


Posted 8 Years Ago


The ideal relationships shown on TV and in stories sometimes don't exist in real life. They are not true to all people and to all couples.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ma'am Belle, this is a great work. As I was reading the piece, i could feel you. I could feel the way the poetic person (probably you) felt. You were able to let me, and probably the others also, connect to the piece through its emotional appeal.

Really, poetry is a good outlet for emotional outbursts. Though the emotion you conveyed in this great piece is filled with sadness or sorrow, you were able to create a piece that defines you as a great writer. Sometimes, it's true that out of sadness comes greatness - the greatness that comes from the stronger person that you become amidst the challenges in life and the greatness of the literary piece that sprouted from your emotion.

Cheer up, Ma'am Belle! =)
And keep writing great pieces,please. hehehe

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joe

8 Years Ago

=) I'm so happy to hear that from you, Ma'am Belle =)

Don't forget that we are just her.. read more
Sir Joe

8 Years Ago

*poetic persona,,,,hehe typo error
Belle

8 Years Ago

Yes, we are family. I can feel that.Thank you. :)
This is very intense and passionate. A write straight from the heart. Very nice Belle. Our best poems just happen like that. 100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful, well formed, easy to read verses. Sadly romantic content that is expressed very well.
Another very fine piece, Belle.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Belle

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the read my dear hopeless romantic friend :)
I feel truly appreciated by all my.. read more
Michael G.

8 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to read your work, Belle.
A foolishness we have all felt. Perfectly captures the feeling of when all we can feel is that love seems to be nothing more than an incurable disease, which we all get infected with at some point. beautifully written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Belle

8 Years Ago

Love like Hate
is extreme
distressful
makes man a fool



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Distant horizons

8 Years Ago

:-)
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Pax
oh, made me smile... :) glad your writing again...
well aren't we all become foolish with it comes to love...
we become awkward, we forget some little details... or even we forgot to wear life vest and drown ourselves into the deep emotions of love... never breathing as if you breathe each other's air...

"allowed you to marry my mind" ~ that happens when someone already took the other half of your heart...

the last stanza is quite and epic end... yes love seldom stays if you don't grab hold of it.. because if you let it set aside...you'll lose it on the see of doubt...

awesome one my friend...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Moved by your melody, and the deep and warm sincerity of this song. This could of only been mined at the source, the soul. Beautifully sad and well written, Belle. My favorite of yours so far. Thank you for sharing it

JDP

Posted 8 Years Ago



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