Trickles

While,
FLOODING the sink,
RESTED my forearms on the rim,
WATCHING the soft reflection; while the pale aqua
DISSOLVED my existence into oblivion,
like the scriptures with faded ink.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[guy drori]

I liked the way you wrote the first word a the beginning of every line in CAPS LOCK.
"Scriptures with faded Ink" is a really nice way to pin the message down. reminds me a bit of the novel 'The Fault In Our Stars" when Gus said he fears oblivion, and Hazel tells him that it is useless to fear oblivion for we will all go there one day, and that it is inevitable. (you should read the book if you haven't)
Great job !

[Kshitij Srivastava]

Actually, I read the first novel of my life some time around january this year, which was.....yes Tfios :D
Since then, i have covered all of john green and the movie too. Infact, when i was writing it, 'oblivion' and Augustus waters entered my head simultaneously.
Yes, I agree the novel is a treat. Thanks for reviewing and glad you liked it : )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

trickles turn into torrents of tears...and they dissolve the present...we watch our reflection, look at our life...and wonder how significant was our life?

[Kshitij Srivastava]

We consider them hard times and only later we realize the importance of musing.
Appreciate that review. :)

[AaronFreitas]

"Dissolved my existence into oblivion"... I loved that line my friend! Good work!

[Kshitij Srivastava]

Thanks a lot...means so much :)