"Torn"

Is sorry enough

To take your sorrows away

'Coz in this love story

I always thought I am to be blame

Knowing you are unhappy

Brought down by your despair

Weigh down by your burdens

My body and soul are torn apart

Am I still worthy...

To stand beside you?

To look beneath your beautiful eyes?

Or even to hold your hand?

Should I fake a smile

In my dying soul

Or should I continue to pretend

That I am fine and in everything, I do not mind

Reviews

[sette]

this is one emotional poem full of woe and sadness

[Restless_Heart]

Thank you for the review. definitely it is an emotional poem.