The Heart Waits

Just a scribble I jotted down back in 2k15. Its not anything special but I just thought I should share it here

To see you, to meet you

Is all I wish for,

Just know that I feel you around me all the time,

The times you passed without looking,

I don't regret them,

Regret is for the moments you looked at me,

Without any feelings,

Regret is for the feelings I have for you,

Hatred turned to love,

How did that happen,

I have no idea,

My heart aches for you,

All the time I think of you,

Every time I see a happy face, I think of you

You changed me, 

You made me strong, your criticism, your complains

You made me weak, you attention, your care

And now I wait, 

Knowing you won't come,

Knowing you don't love me back,

But the heart does, 

And it waits,

The heart waits

Reviews

[Terra]

I love poems like this. It's a shared experience with people whom you've never actually met. To me, it is comforting to know that I am not the only one who has felt loss to such a degree, but not in a "misery loves company" kind of way. More like people have gone through something painful, just like me, and they still find the will and strength to carry on even though it hurts, and if they can, I can. Bravo

[Laura Kate]

This is lovely, a strong connection which seems almost unbearable. A couple of grammatical points which might need looking at, but a lovely tone and rhythm! :)

[Markus Anthony]

awww my heart is wailing right now, I have felt your agony, your longing, the sadness and infatuation rolled in one masterpiece. I love how it turned out in the end where the heart is ready for endure the act of waiting. God bless you x