Answer Me?

Answer Me?

A Poem by iamshadowine

Can you tell me why I exist,
No feeling in my heart persist?
Can you tell me why I die,
Everyday a monotonous cry?
To change the past, or to strive,
For the better, or is it all a lie?

© 2016 iamshadowine


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For a reason.
You need something to love, to hold onto.
Something is missing in your life, go out and find it.
That's for you to decide.


Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your review
The meaning of life is everything that's left when you take out things that have no meaning. It's up to you to find your own truth among this world's lies.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
as they say life is what you make it, you can live a lie or take the ride and enjoy what life has to offer, its a one time offer only. nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Yes! It's all a lie! Even the truth is a lie! Blasphemy upon us all! Doom and gloom! Perfidy and pestilence! Progressive degeneration! Duplicating deception! Indulgent Insurrection! Flummoxing frugality! Undulating underhanded haberdashery ! Goodness! I thought I wasn't gonna survive!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
😂

8 Years Ago

Happy days wanderer. Do not give into the lie (truth). Just be free.
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Questions with formidable weight. As to why the oppressing darkness inside? ...maybe the light flickered for a second. maybe you just have to find a new source of light. :)
as for wanting to make a change for the better. Even if the attempts seem useless, or like they're failed. .you gotta be stubborn, and keep pushing on, that is of course if you believe the goal is worth it. why we exist? debatable... I'd rather stop babbling now and say you're a great poet :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Lol, thank you 😊
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8 Years Ago

Always welcome :)
beautiful just beautiful
amazingly written keep it up :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Urja Gokani

8 Years Ago

welcome :)
Awesome poem!!
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you 😊
A very good question....
I really enjoyed reading it......
Keep it up....

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you :D
Beautiful poem. Really enjoyed read

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you! :D
Deep! Deep!! Deep!!! I really enjoyed this. I could feel the panic and confusion embedded in the narrators voice and I also had a glimpse of my own questioning thoughts too.

"can you tell me why I exist?" I think the question mark would be more appropriate for that first line. But regardless, the poem is beautiful because it can be taken from a religious point of view i.e questioning God or some Ethereal being or something. It could also be taken from the purely inquisitive side of someone whose struggling to get a grip on what it is their purpose is.

It takes on a depressive undertone but it also begs the question: "aren't we all depressed, one way or another?".

Keep writing Shadowine. Keep the poems pouring in. Going ahead to read more of your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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