Weather Beaten

Life clouds my vision
all I see is cold drizzle
washing me away.

Reviews

[s y e]

Oh Anne, I do hate winter sometimes. That time of year where it's old, dark and dull and can reflect your mood in some way or another. A lovely senryu.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks my little noodle.

[The Hampstead Poet]

A simplistic, yet deeply philosophical haiku. Very thought provoking...

[icelandicblue]

Simple and deep- I like that summation. Thank you.

[Pryde Foltz]

A very atmospheric and mood-filled senyru. When it rains; it pours.

[icelandicblue]

Yes it does. Thanks Pryde.

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow this is one buzz kill of a Senryu.

[icelandicblue]

That's me!!! ;)

[Daffy]

Oh, dear....I hope you are not describing how you feel now and for your future, but rather just the Winter's worst! Personally, I always feel that way every Winter. I'm a Spring person, and the Winter is just a season to persevere with hope of the Spring to come. This poem is short, sweet, and mind provoking.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Daffy for your review!

[Kimmie]

I hate this weather. It's so... depressing? Makes you feel sad and lonely. Loved this Senryu.

[icelandicblue]

Thank you Kimmie, the weather is not always kind.

[Kimmie]

Absolutely not.

[Jack...]

Spring is right atround the corner my friend, though this winter seems a damn long block. Very nice Anne.

[icelandicblue]

Hopefully an early one my friend. Thank you so much.

[Frieda P]

I felt this in my bones, like the damp weather. Dark Senryu, works perfectly Anne.

[icelandicblue]

Thank you Frieda, the days are getting longer maybe it won't be so dark.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I feel this way sometimes.well penned blue:)

[icelandicblue]

I think few of us escape never feeling like this.

[Vidya Bacchus]

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