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Oh, December

Oh, December

A Poem by icomeanon_13

Oh, December- when will you be happy again? 
I longed for you in November- how I wished you were here. 
Now- 
If only I could turn back time to that one day when all was perfect and right- 
When my heart was full and banished Evil was nowhere in sight. 
Oh, December how I mourn that you ever came. 
 When will I be happy again?

© 2014 icomeanon_13


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The months of October, November, and December bring back so much nostalgia. Those are where my happiest moments are born. But that doesn't mean I can't find happiness in other months. Enjoyable and relate able poem. Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Funny how a month can change our thoughts and our emotion. I liked the use of description bringing to life the need to return back to November. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

icomeanon_13

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
its awesome POV writing....
an end can be sad and tragic or it can bring hope and happiness.
i liked it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short but very powerful. Most of the times life is not what we expect, it shocks and surprises us everytime. But there's always a hope in our heart that one day everything will be alright.
Thanks for sharing this excellent piece of work...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


beautiful piece. December really is a sad time. it symbolises an end. we need to keep in mind that a new beginning always starts at the end. loved the comparison.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I know this feeling!
I love the concept of this.
Keep up the lovely writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can relate to this
life tends to not conform to our expectations
what we think will happen rarely happens
and what we feel from moment to moment can change for any reason

Posted 9 Years Ago


icomeanon_13

9 Years Ago

Lizzie! This is the kind of review I am *always* looking for. Thanks for your solid input.
icomeanon_13

9 Years Ago

I changed "Would that I could" to "If only I could," but adding more felt too personal and I've neve.. read more
Lizzie Mitchell

9 Years Ago

I know what you mean
If you read my haiku, "poetry" or my most recent unfinished piece I feel .. read more

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Added on December 8, 2014
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icomeanon_13

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While I've been writing for years (13 or so), I've only recently started writing in earnest (i.e.: writing a single story with a determination I've not had before). I have a degree in English Lite.. more..

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