The Brightest Star I See!

Motivational poem for my children. My message is to be strong, have faith, always try your best, and never give up believing in yourself, no matter how difficult life is or how alone you may feel.

While gazing at the stars one night,

I noticed how one shone so bright.

Although, it's all alone,

It's rejoicing on its own.

 

It's all alone up in the sky;

No friends to love are close nearby.

But, speaking honestly,

It's the brightest star I see!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

A brilliant glimpse into the sky and into the very fabric of being... bright and beautiful... This was a lifting, hopeful write and perfect for a Friday!

[Slim Pikkens]

Simple, but the idea is clear; It's a sweet strong poem that encourages individuality, against the odds. Nice.