The Brightest Star I See!

The Brightest Star I See!

A Chapter by I'd Rather Write

Motivational poem for my children. My message is to be strong, have faith, always try your best, and never give up believing in yourself, no matter how difficult life is or how alone you may feel.


While gazing at the stars one night,

I noticed how one shone so bright.

Although, it's all alone,

It's rejoicing on its own.


It's all alone up in the sky;

No friends to love are close nearby.

But, speaking honestly,

It's the brightest star I see!

© 2013 I'd Rather Write

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A brilliant glimpse into the sky and into the very fabric of being... bright and beautiful... This was a lifting, hopeful write and perfect for a Friday!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Simple, but the idea is clear; It's a sweet strong poem that encourages individuality, against the odds. Nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 28, 2011
Last Updated on April 11, 2013
Tags: Star, Bright Star, Brightest Star, Sky, star gazing


I'd Rather Write
I'd Rather Write

Aurora, IL

I'm just a simple, low-profile guy who loves and worships the Lord, who finds value in working hard to obtain a better life for his family, who loves to write, and who lives a portion of his weekly li.. more..