Pills

Pills

A Poem by Sarissari
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Another Poem

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The doctors filled my prescription
As I waited for my conviction
I watched them mutter it will be ok
Just take one or two a day

Days turn to mess
But nevertheless
I felt their test

One maybe two they'd say
But it only left me in dismay
Yet a solution in my view
Could it be true?

A drink or two may do
Trickling blood filled my stew
Now, I know
One or two is the clue
To my flu

© 2017 Sarissari


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Sarissari
Just another poem. Hope you like and review

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Welcome to my neighborhood! Everyone I knows hooked on pills. Problems seem so endless..... I felt your poem. Great job and thanks for the read!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sarissari

2 Years Ago

Thanks dookiesmiles
This is a nice, easy to follow piece, I love the rhyming

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sarissari

2 Years Ago

thanks molly. I dont use big words much lol
this was great in the way it made me feel as if i were in some tacky air-conditioned waiting room getting glared at wanting to jump out of your own skin. on the way home reflecting on the idea of moderation knowing it would last a day or two. Its just me, but at least your poem did something! i like it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sarissari

2 Years Ago

thanks mercy party
Easy to follow and good to read poem.

The first part - very well rhymed

Mark.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarissari

2 Years Ago

Thank you Matrixmark
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SKY
Days turn to mess
But nevertheless
I felt their test..

The poem is really nice. I enjoyed the read thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sarissari

2 Years Ago

Thanks Sky and no problem.
SKY

2 Years Ago

Your welcome!
Oh those dastardly flus. Just need a bit of correction, nothing serious. I like that you wrote on something that normally isn't written about..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarissari

2 Years Ago

Omg, Thats what I get for writing while tired. Just going to fix that. No one noticed anything...lol
Tbear

2 Years Ago

no biggie dear me..editing is the least of our worries ..te getting the emotion down is most importa.. read more
Sarissari

2 Years Ago

yeah, I'll check them out and thanks :)
The state I feel I am in right now

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarissari

2 Years Ago

Ohh dear, I hope the best. Thank you for the review.

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Added on January 16, 2017
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Hello person, Ok, I am back for a bit, but I will be doing reviews. I will write later. I love to write poetry. I usually write weird poems, but most of them are from personal experiences. Hope .. more..

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