Awakening part 2

Awakening part 2

A Poem by Sarissari
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This is part 2 of awakening it is not exactly the same topics, but just a part 2 of the same idea. If you like this one check out awakening one of my favorites thanks for reading.

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I can hear them
We consider them
Them and me
One we can be

Waking sheep
Heaps and heaps
No shy, no lie
For I am one of the lies of many.

Stripping sanity
Down and down
The farewell

For many is me
No more she
Nor me

Them and me
Me and them
Them....them

© 2018 Sarissari


Author's Note

Sarissari
Took forever to write this one but here it is. Not cause its long but no time lol. Anyways reviews would help lots, thanks. Ohh if you could find the connection between the 2 I would be quite surprised.

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I really like this but it doesn't feel like the end I feel like there should be one more line.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarissari

11 Months Ago

Thank you weakfreak. I was thinking the same actually, but I wanted it to end on a repeat. So it loo.. read more
WeakFreak

11 Months Ago

I understand, it works

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