Liquid Motivation

Don't ask, sometimes the most random things get written when I'm bored *laughs* I think I wrote this a little over a year ago.

I flow like water in a world of hatred

Finding my path through the smallest crack

Eroding past enemies of rock

And even crumbling those of titanium

The world is my destination

Mother nature being my direction

Travelling through Earths creaveses

Falling from the cotton of the sky

Those who try to stop me

Will be drowned inside my soul

I will carry them to their coffin

Nobody will ever know

That every fiber of my being

Is the creation of life

But I will just as easily take it away

With the quick force of my foamy knife

Taking form of anything I choose be

Crashing down upon your drowning body

I will carry you out to sea

So use me with caution, I will make peace

Drink the blood of my being

Keeping humanity alive

Flowing, falling, drifting out to sea

Forever living a life

Never knowing where I'll be.

Reviews

[shiloh jennings]

this piece is intense; literally -- not just the colloquialismistic way in which that word has become fair use. I could feel this one building as I read each word. Wow.

[AmeliaRose]

that was a great poem, it flowed really well. it shows a lot of emotion and details which makes it a overall nice poem.