Bathe Me

Bathe Me

A Poem by SacredRose
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Written: July 22, 2008

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drip, drip

falling, pouring

cleansing

sweet or salty

hot or cold

fill with suds,

for your pleasure

wet.

pitter patter

not of feet

against my steamy window

flash, bang

wanting more

craving more,

of you.

© 2008 SacredRose


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Wow!!!

I LOVE THIS

Its so short, so simple, but so...

Great:P

i love the formatting of this, and i love the subtle eroticism of it really.

Nice:P



Posted 15 Years Ago
Well written I enjoyed
Ray

Posted 15 Years Ago

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SacredRose
SacredRose

Rose City, Canada



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Hi. My names Katie, I've been writing since I was about 13 years old. I think what inspired me most to start writing were the hard times that occured around that age, and putting those anxieties down .. more..

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