My True Love

My True Love

A Poem by Escape My Fate


I fall apart and crash to the floor
Crying out everything, my heart, my soul
Then you came up
And held me in your arms
Holding me through the rain
You put my face
Against your chest
And whispered softly in my ear
"We are better than Romeo, or Juliet
Or Adam and Eve
Mary or Joseph
Edward or Bella
Rosalie or Emmett
Jasper or Alice
Or anyone else in the world
Or even in fantasies   
We are meant to be together
For the rest of our lives
And all of eternity 
I love you with all my heart
And i never want to let you go."
I looked up with tears in my eyes
We kissed in the rain
At the dead of night
We didn't care
About the people staring at us
I felt my heart fluttering to my throat.
I wrapped my arms around your neck
And never wanted to let go
From that moment on,
I knew you were the one.

© 2010 Escape My Fate

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I really like this poem, especially 'cos it doesn't rhyme (I can't rhyme for my life!) and the feeling of it is so strong. I think you really brought on something in this poem. You definately get your point across. I wouldn't say it's PERFECT (because no writing really is) and it needs a bit of work, but that doesn't stop me from thinking it's excellent. It's certainly better than my own poems. *cowers in shame of them*

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is reallyyy good! It had a lot of emotion. Veryy cute!
Great job!(:

Posted 10 Years Ago

I really love poems with such strong emotion. You have crafted a very lovely poem here and whoever this is for, will absolutely love it. I love the images that you evoke for the reader. I felt involved as a reader, not just a spectator which is very difficult to achieve in poetry like this. Well done! Thank you for sharing this here! All the best.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on November 23, 2010
Last Updated on November 23, 2010
Tags: My, True, Love, romantic