A look of hope

                              A look upon a big and tall garden

                              I grab a empty milk cardon and fill it with water

                             I pour water on all the flowers.

                              Giving them all power

                             I stop and look down beside my feet

                            A small soulful flower thats ready to burst

                            Giving us full happiness and spreading beauty

                             Its struggling its way to survive

                             As all the other fully grown plants laugh and laugh at the small one

                             Not me though not me i see somthing for the small flower

                             I see a look of hope.

                             I will nuture it so the hope i saw in it will begin...

Reviews

[Owl City]

good writeing! ya i feel sry for the flower... but still good writeing and it does seem like your compareing it to something in your life. r u?

[Celia Smith <3]

nice, my brother is wrong, and i fill bad for the flower.

[Madara Uchiha]

nice write i like it, and it sounds like you are talking about your self.

[Chrissy]

i like it!
i kindda feel sad for the flower!

[Shugotenshi1692]

it can be compared to the shy kid on the playground who makes sumthng out of himself l8r. i don't know if you meant the metaphor, but it was cool whether it was on purpose or not.