A look of hope

A look of hope

A Poem by vampireprincess

                              A look upon a big and tall garden

                              I grab a empty milk cardon and fill it with water

                             I pour water on all the flowers.

                              Giving them all power

                             I stop and look down beside my feet

                            A small soulful flower thats ready to burst

                            Giving us full happiness and spreading beauty

                             Its struggling its way to survive

                             As all the other fully grown plants laugh and laugh at the small one

                             Not me though not me i see somthing for the small flower

                             I see a look of hope.

                             I will nuture it so the hope i saw in it will begin...

© 2009 vampireprincess

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good writeing! ya i feel sry for the flower... but still good writeing and it does seem like your compareing it to something in your life. r u?

Posted 13 Years Ago

nice, my brother is wrong, and i fill bad for the flower.

Posted 14 Years Ago

nice write i like it, and it sounds like you are talking about your self.

Posted 14 Years Ago

i like it!
i kindda feel sad for the flower!

Posted 14 Years Ago

it can be compared to the shy kid on the playground who makes sumthng out of himself l8r. i don't know if you meant the metaphor, but it was cool whether it was on purpose or not.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on February 16, 2009



south holland, IL

Hi i love to watch naruto and play video games espeicially guitar hero and i frankly watch any type of anime show and love comedy shows and movies and i love to write stories and i plan on being a wri.. more..

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