feelings

feelings

A Poem by Shapirta
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a poem of feelings- please review

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The feelings of my heart
are so full of me
 I might just fall apart,
If I don't let it out immediately
sometimes I feel lonely,
no friends around to help,
my diary,  my only
  you may just heard me yelp

sometimes I feel sad,
depressed, and full of despair,
all I need is my writing pad,
and my sadness goes elsewhere.

sometimes I feel happy
sun shining down on my face,
 around me, trees grow quite sappy,
everything, I embrace

© 2014 Shapirta


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Fun and beautifully composed. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing! =)
So aptly described.. Writing cures it for a while.
I do this too. Be happy. Be sad. People fade but this.. never does.
Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked the imagery of the poem a lot! I believe you caught the sense of isolation very well. To me as a reader, I enjoyed how ever stanza encompassed a new side to the writer's mind set. Very lyrical. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot! my favorite thing i wrote here was 'the silver necklace'. can you do me a huge favor a.. read more
Martin28

9 Years Ago

No problem :D
Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks so much! i am also open to any constructive criticism, on the story!
I can certainly relate. Very nice poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks, uh... I can't really pronounce your name =)
b4i8islept

9 Years Ago

Before I ate I slept but you can call me Roger :)
Shapirta

9 Years Ago

okay! sounds good, Roger!

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dude hi!, NY



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