a sad rainbow

a sad rainbow

A Poem by Shapirta
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a poem on a sad rainbow please read and review!

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Have you ever seen a sad rainbow?
with the colors of depression?
have you seen a sad rainbow?
that gave you a sorrowful impression?

Have you ever seen a sad rainbow?
made of black, white, and grey?
have you seen a sad rainbow?
which made you heavyhearted all day?

no you have not seen a sad rainbow.
because they're only here for happiness.
you have not seen a sad rainbow.
for they are just fabulous.

© 2014 Shapirta


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Shapirta
please review! i want to know what you think!

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This made me smile. Very well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thank you!
I like the way you build an image and deliver your message. This is an interesting and fun write. Brought a smile.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks, tricia
This is a sweet, beautiful poem! :) I'm glad there are only happy rainbows in the sky! Great job Amy! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks, kieta
The ending gave me a good chuckle. Excellent write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot!
very nice im more of a dark poetry person but this made me smile

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks, and i could tell by your profile pic! lol =)
RayXor

9 Years Ago

i just dont take good smiley pic.s lol plus my daughter said i look like batman in this one :)
Shapirta

9 Years Ago

shes right! i just noticed that, lol
I really like it Amy :)
Every colour drains when we are depressed but it also resides in us to make it fabulous again..
pretty..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks, sindu
This is a very well constructed poem with good rhyme, a nice piece. A lot of people with mature profiles won't be able to friend you, just so you know.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

anything with content that would seem grown up, but particularly the birds and bees. You see, not ev.. read more
Shapirta

9 Years Ago

birds and bees? wierd hint!
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Never mind, you will figure it out. Anything that might be in a movie or book not intended for child.. read more
Very cute! And considering you're so young I'm impressed. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks, haley
God's covenant with Noah... Rainbows are beautiful indeed. A happy poem that reminds us of the positives of rainbows by contrasting with nonexistent negatives. Very nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


good pen to paper here on your poem keep writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shapirta

9 Years Ago

thanks, deep!

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Added on September 7, 2014
Last Updated on September 7, 2014
Tags: poem, sad, rainbow, sad rainbow, happy, dull, depression

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dude hi!, NY



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