Keep Fighting

  Never give up.

 

  Never admit they won.

  Keep going.

  Keep walking.

  Keep fighting

  Until you have revenge. 

Author's Note

Stop hating

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Wow, this poem is kind of like those with the secret message within them. To me as I read, this poem speaks to those who rely on nothing but hatred and nurse it within their veins, this poem expresses it in a beautiful way saying, "Hey will you stop and smell the daisies?" Very nice read.

[Short.Nerd]

Nice!

[sherwin]

Okay now I think your at a point where you need to stop and really look at what youre writing. Do you feel challenged? Do you feel like you are challenging your readers? Short and to a point.

[Allie :)]

WOW WOW WOW!
This was so good, it made me want to slap a baby in the face multiple times. You've managed to shove so much emotion and truth into 6 simple lines. This really got me thinking. :) You should check out some of my pieces!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Coded and resilient, well played

[raindroplove]

hmmmmmmm......:)

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

Nice message.

[Fabric Pulse]

Meaning hidden but on the surface, question is, can everyone see it?

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, very powerful

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love this poem...I understand what you mean...anyways...good write. :D