Hey Hey Mr Sandman

Hey Hey Mr Sandman

A Poem by Imagedden
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For any one that has ever had a dream.

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Come with me, in my dream machine
And we could fly above the sky
Above the sky you can see
Twilight dreams and the unforseen
We could ride cosmic tides
Hand in hand until time subsides


Hey Hey Mr Sandman
I find it really hard to understand
The world and its current state of mind
But I just want to live
Oh I just want to live
Yeah in dreamland


We could surf around the earth
Or watch Pink Floyd from an asteroid
Tonights the night to light the sky
With sparklers made from lemonade
All on board an astral plane
And circle round sound until we can�t be found

Hey Hey Mr Sandman
I find it really hard to understand
The world and its current state of mind
But I just want to live
Oh I just want to live
Yeah in dreamland

Walk on air without a care
And we�d avoid Mr Sigmund Freud
Shooting stars lassooed Mars
How bizarre for my guitar
Tumbleweed zephyrs made of feathers
And you were the one that put it together

© 2008 Imagedden


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This is really cool, and has quite a lyrical quality about it. You have some unique phrasing here:

"With sparklers made from lemonade"
and
"And we'd avoid Mr Sigmund Freud Shooting stars lassooed Mars How bizarre for my guitar Tumbleweed zephyrs made of feathers"

Great piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like your writing style. Very uplifting. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You seem to have combined a few songs together to get the feel of this. Yeah, I'm old enough to have heard them. lol. I like how you take the reader away to places and the mind is then drifting off and having the ride of it's life!! Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is definitely original and seemed to be more of a song...great lyrical quality to it...love the line "I really find it hard to understand the world and its current state of mind". Amen to that! This was like an invitation to escape it for a while. I will most definitely be reading more of you. Thanks for the friend request.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really cool, and has quite a lyrical quality about it. You have some unique phrasing here:

"With sparklers made from lemonade"
and
"And we'd avoid Mr Sigmund Freud Shooting stars lassooed Mars How bizarre for my guitar Tumbleweed zephyrs made of feathers"

Great piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, I really like this poem, it's kinda surreal in a way. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Imagedden
Imagedden

Newcastle, Australia



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I am a 51 year old Australian male wannabee poet/musician looking to regain writing momentum and connecting with various other writers. Have no restrictions and my favourite quote and creed is by Ral.. more..

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