If Only Her Heart Was Visible

If Only Her Heart Was Visible

A Poem by imagination101

The heart needs to see what the eyes already do!



















Time wasted on fake love and romance

Heart blind-sided from what the eyes already see

Energy spent trying to fill in the signification

Smiles drip from a sad face like raindrops


Whispering words of love parade deep in her subconscious,

longing to be reborn into feelings of emotions

Substruction of her heart is losing foundation

Pain presses deep inside


Her once perfect world tilts upside down

Truth spills into prisms of light

Perfumed collar breathes another woman

Lipstick kiss on cheek smears affair


Cold silken sheets accomodate only her

Frozen memories of lover's nights stir life long ago

Flattery seep from lying lips

His deceit leaves her vulnerable and naked


If only her heart was visible it could see the truth like

her eyes already do









© 2012 imagination101

Author's Note

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It sounds like "she" liked a guy , a lot, then he
talked her into a lover`s tryst (LIES) then he
got dressed and left. Sorry !
I think the poem is flowing, beautiful and very well done.
It will be interesting to follow this writer. I sense excitng
and wonderous things to come.
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

Thanks again for the awesome review!
Sad, very sad, to hear someones heart break. You have captured an emotion that tests the soul and the mind. Unanswered questions, thoughts of why, feelings of not good enough...the pain, so very sad but so nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing!
Its a really philsophic peice, the picture fits perfetly. Its hard, yet fragile.

Posted 7 Years Ago

This had so much imagery to it that the true meaning was almost lost to me. And than the meaning of the story hit me and I realized how much feelings were trapped into those words. Truly a great poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Sad. IMO this is the best line "His deceit leaves her vulnerable and naked"

Posted 7 Years Ago

seamless poetic quality that unravels the longings and throes of the human heart^

Posted 7 Years Ago

absolutely, beautifully written

Posted 7 Years Ago

Funny how so many people can see the signs and still not believe them..I hate the sneaky ones that leave no signs..kathie

Posted 7 Years Ago

some like to hide thier heart, for fear of trust.
Nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

This invokes a whole segment of power. I am not sure how I can write here how I could identify with this, but has moved me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago


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32 Reviews
Added on September 20, 2012
Last Updated on September 24, 2012
Tags: Love, Affair, Eyes, Heart, Feelings



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