If Only Her Heart Was Visible

If Only Her Heart Was Visible

A Poem by imagination101
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The heart needs to see what the eyes already do!

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Time wasted on fake love and romance

Heart blind-sided from what the eyes already see

Energy spent trying to fill in the signification

Smiles drip from a sad face like raindrops

 

Whispering words of love parade deep in her subconscious,

longing to be reborn into feelings of emotions

Substruction of her heart is losing foundation

Pain presses deep inside

 

Her once perfect world tilts upside down

Truth spills into prisms of light

Perfumed collar breathes another woman

Lipstick kiss on cheek smears affair

 

Cold silken sheets accomodate only her

Frozen memories of lover's nights stir life long ago

Flattery seep from lying lips

His deceit leaves her vulnerable and naked

 

If only her heart was visible it could see the truth like

her eyes already do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 imagination101


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It sounds like "she" liked a guy , a lot, then he
talked her into a lover`s tryst (LIES) then he
got dressed and left. Sorry !
I think the poem is flowing, beautiful and very well done.
It will be interesting to follow this writer. I sense excitng
and wonderous things to come.
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 6 Years Ago


imagination101

6 Years Ago

Thanks again for the awesome review!
Sad, very sad, to hear someones heart break. You have captured an emotion that tests the soul and the mind. Unanswered questions, thoughts of why, feelings of not good enough...the pain, so very sad but so nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


imagination101

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing!
Its a really philsophic peice, the picture fits perfetly. Its hard, yet fragile.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This had so much imagery to it that the true meaning was almost lost to me. And than the meaning of the story hit me and I realized how much feelings were trapped into those words. Truly a great poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sad. IMO this is the best line "His deceit leaves her vulnerable and naked"

Posted 7 Years Ago


seamless poetic quality that unravels the longings and throes of the human heart^

Posted 7 Years Ago


absolutely, beautifully written

Posted 7 Years Ago


Funny how so many people can see the signs and still not believe them..I hate the sneaky ones that leave no signs..kathie

Posted 7 Years Ago


some like to hide thier heart, for fear of trust.
Nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


imagination101

7 Years Ago

Thanks!
This invokes a whole segment of power. I am not sure how I can write here how I could identify with this, but has moved me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


imagination101

7 Years Ago

Thanks!

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Added on September 20, 2012
Last Updated on September 24, 2012
Tags: Love, Affair, Eyes, Heart, Feelings

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imagination101

Harrisville, MS



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