Heartache Beats In Rhythm Of Blue

A lady mourns her husbands death.

Whimsical dreams of him mesmerize her sleep

A love that glows in the shades of passion

Contentment plays upon her spine

Words never said entangle with the midnight breeze

Rain showers down and nourish the pain

Heartache beats in rhythm of blue

Finger tips touch the depth of grief bestowed upon her heart

Visions of him dance in hour glass of memories

Wedding bells and vows whisper goodbye,while the ring on her finger echos forever

Heartache beats in rhythm of blue

Lingering fragments of him kiss her succulent lips good morning

Anger encircles her day as he fades away

Body language signs loneliness

Each breath she takes freezes a moment in time

Heartache beats in rhythm of blue

Days are miles of darkness, not to dream of him

A broken heart, cupid can no longer mend

Hugs and kisses, hang bloody on the end of his arrow

Her soul mate is now a heartache that beats rhythms of blue

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think?

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I could really picture the details of this poem with ease. I could feel the warmth of the bodies and also the coldness of being alone. The emotions you inspire leave the reader feeling like they have stepped into another world.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you for the wonderful review!

[Tina Kline]

Very emotional, full of heartache and pain.
You did a wonderful job on catching how sad and broken hearted she is.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[Tina Kline]

You're welcome.

[Ladysue]

such a sadness in this piece..your last line says it all! beautiful written..

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you very much for the review!

[realmwriter]

I think that either you have experianced great emotional loss and suffred through it alone, or you have helped another through same said loss. Either way their abides in this piece a darkness that only a few share. It takes one to know one and I know I feel it here. even if the piece as a whole isn't written that dark, it is there. Very well done.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks for the review!!

[realmwriter]

You're most welcome.

[WindSong]

I think this is an amazing poem filled with soft and gentle words! The presentation is solid and the imagery is very well received by the reader! I'm glad I stopped by to read!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

A well written poem with a sad story. Loss of a love's one leave empty places we can't fill.
"Her soul mate is now a heartache that beats rhythms of blue"
The above line describe the feel of a heartache. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks Coyote, for your kind review!

[A. Amos]

Love your style of writing brilliant and elegant. Thanks for sharing

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks for reviewing!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful ache... Such an overwhelming sadness here.. like the sun fading into black... or yes.. the color of a blue world... all that was drifting away.. powerful and profound..

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you Craig, for the review!

[KAREN]

Awesome write! I enjoyed it, and really hope others will read! Bravo!
100/100