Divine Intervention

Divine Intervention

A Poem by imagination101

trying to find your way through life.



Wandering aimlessly on the face of the earth,

uncertain where my life is going.

I ask myself the questions.

Am I heading in the right direction?

or is this the wrong path?


I sense an aurora around me.

I am astonished.

The encounter leaves me breathless.


A presence so strong engulfs me.

Eyes are watching, scrutinizing my every move.

Gazing around I see no one.


A touch of a gentle hand caresses my back,

it is calming, but yet sends a shiver down my spine.

Swiftly I turn to look, but no one is around.


I hear a tender tone, a whisper in my ear ,

from unseen lips.

The words are vague.

Pure exhaustion over takes me.

Unshed tears glisten my eyes.


My steps grow wobbly.

I trip and fall.

all strength is gone.

I contemplate my next move.

Fear holds me down.


Suddenly the presence is back.

The eyes,

The caress,

The whisper,

ministering to me.


A magnificent, divine feeling surges through me.

I bask in the comfort it provides.

Looking toward heaven I.....

embrace His touch,

listen to His voice.


Eyes on my Heavenly Father,

I take hold of His hand.

I stand in His footsteps.

His love encircles me,

giving me the strength and assurance to move on.

I smile, knowing that God is crafting my way.


© 2011 imagination101

Author's Note

Something I wrote that I hope inspires my readers!
Any mistakes let me know, thanks!

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very well written!!! Great job.!:)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Warm, comforting and inspirational. Love the title :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

A classic poem and a pure delight.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I enjoyed this piece... contemplating, reaching out to, and connecting with the Divine... then moving forward in that Presence
Divine intervention may be more common than many think, and may actually always be with us

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is an inspiring piece and it's nicely written.

Posted 9 Years Ago

A spiritual awaking in the making it is amazing in those times of need are prayers are answered in a most unexplainable way.
Excellent write.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is very inspiring, Imagination. And wonderfully written. Showing hardships and indecision, unable to see what is guiding you and yet knowing the feeling to be "magnificent, divine", leading you where you need to go. I very much love to read religious pieces, to see how people interpret Him and this was beautiful. Lined with hope and faith. Love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

this was soothing and hopeful - i think aurora should be aura...otherwise - everything else is right on :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

You have summed up the topic of Him..very, very well loved it..Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on January 26, 2011
Last Updated on January 27, 2011
Tags: Life, Path, Presence, Heavenly Father



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