Poseidon The Travel Agent

Poseidon The Travel Agent

A Poem by imagination101
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Poseidon god of the sea have mercy on me.

Take your trident and send me on a vacation, a secluded beach where the waves relax me. The vigorous pace of my busy life has shook my insides like an earthquake, crumbling me to exhaustion. Peace and quiet is all I need, nothing but the mysterious sea nymphs singing in their beautiful sirens voices to sooth me. Poseidon, my mature man, can you please help me?

© 2011 imagination101


Author's Note

imagination101
Had to pick a god or goddess to write about using the words in my tag box. I picked Poseidon god of the sea. I had a hard time writing this one, finally this came to mind, so I went with it! Tell me what you think!

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i really like this.... great job sorry i havent been around much

Posted 8 Years Ago


this came out excellent. i like the image of poseidon and his trident, god of the sea. the plight of the narrator is prevalent in today's high-paced world. water has always been a soothing reference. great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


love it!
Excellent write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


You have a great way of drawing your reader in with the words that you in creating your poems. This was fun and relaxing to read, a highly enjoyable poem to be loved by all.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A really fun piece to read! If only.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful use of the words! And can I go with you, I promise to be quiet! LOL

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beside the itty bitty typo (Earthquake)
This is a really good, I would have like
to have seen maybe a little more, but
overall very good....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Who best to ask to arrange a sea vacation? A fun and enjoyable poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like this...hope Poseidon sends you on that vacation. A very enjoyable and fun poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow...
I am speechless.

SO FAR, YOUR BEST WRITE I HAVE EVER READ.
(and THAT says A LOT.)

And you really nailed all the details!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on August 17, 2011
Last Updated on August 20, 2011
Tags: Ocean, Trident, earthquake, Sirens, Nymph, Mysterious, Vigorous

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Harrisville, MS



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