The Egyptian Awakens

Enthusiastic,revolutionary

The Egyptian Awakens

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Let go of your shivering veins advocating your sleepy blood

Abandon your shame covered by cells razing fatal lazy spots

Repel your hesitated will to clean your mind from s****y mud

let go of all your feverish dreams expelling your Egyptian being

 

Behold the most silent lamb humming tunes of sincerest purest lampoon

 

Define the lowest human cowardliness towards peaceful giant protesters

Abandon hateful consecutive feeding to us filthiest thoughts spreading illness

While sipping rage, hope, dignity from our souls then spitting them on us

Repel sucking sinuous sweet taste abstracted from our pain to destruct us

Behold our nation conquering all land with claims beyond reasonable doubt

Casting away every doomed consumed thought vanishing deeply in hell darkness

 

Raise hopeful positive dreams buried under years of own denial steamed  resistance

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Legacy]

Iman A.elazim,

Very Interesting...

A bit out of my league I must say. This write indeed left me pondering on many question. Seems it would be a great opener for a novel.

Alot of powerful thoughts - Your write leaves us wondering Great Job.

Have a Wonderful Day

Legacy

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[Iman A.elazim]

It has been a year since Egyptian nation , followed by Libya , Syria & Yemen to blown up with revolutionary beams which was started by
a Tunas ion spark.

This poem was a celebration of what we must do , foretelling all sequence of events which had taken place whole through
2011 , starting from ending an era in 11,02,2011 racing fast rush
of happenings that made a true Ara bin spring.

Hope the energy which God has given us as a sward to kill all
evil , resentful , corrupted, filthy creatures from our lives
preventing them from spreading their black wings to haunt
our middle eastern world with darkness, so as

to complete and fulfil our task of missinary quest.

[Iman A.elazim]

Thank you strange-girl & Raven
for both your reviews

I guess you both assumed that it's a dark poem

on the contrary I'm addressing the Arab people who are still
waiting for some other force or big countries supervision
in order to take action against all the

abuse we take from our Leaders & from foriegn contries ,
this poem was to start on the campaign to cease negative attitude

[strange_gurl]

thats a very very dark poem Iman,i've read it about 5 times now and i GUESS that what you saying in your poem is that arabs should let go of what they call ''honor'' ?sorry if i messunderstood it

[Ravenskald]

very dark
you abandon hope so soon ?
and faith too ?
or have I misread my friend ?

I hope this is so

R