Sweet Torture~ "waiting"

verse of challenge

 I came to a place to vent through written word.

   He came to this place and challenged~~~

     I came ALIVE again!

My core is a dictionary , the words awaiting order.

   Somedays, they leap out in profusion~

      other times.......illusion.

Not writing is a dimming of my light.

   Writing is an exposure to my soul.....

     for those who are in MY world.

Now......I wait with anticipation......alive with excitement.

   Come to me......

       to our world.

Reviews

[visions of doom]

aah tis a fine wee romantic soul that ye are , the challenge of the written word , ahh such music for a tender heart , shakespeare himself would be proud of ye .

[John J. Smiley]

Short AND profound. Your use of words is cutting. Like a fine sharp sword handled by an expert swords(person).
Excellent. Thanks.

[Masquerade]

For such a short poem, this piece has a lot of depth. It's very well written. This was a joy to read. Nice job!