angel

the doctor gave one
but she already had three
I would kill for more

 

I get no chance
God received an angel
that only I know

 

I miss her so much
but I must survive without
she hates pouting

Reviews

[Alicia Isabella Lane]

Hmmmm I really like this ... diffrent from you normal style, I would like to see more of this.

[Carl Fraser]

I feel your pain man......................Blessings Carl

[Sarah]

This is an interesting, sweet poem. I'm guessing it's about the death of a dear friend, who you wish could still be with you. ^_^ You capture both the sorrow and beauty of your angel in so few lines, great job!