Maybe

A Poem by Jennifer Neuman

Maybe

Maybe you can do this

And prove the whole world wrong

I selfishly believe in you

That you will not do harm

You say 11 days

That turns my stomach too

I beg I plead for more

Please just let me help you

Save you from your own war

What if I'm not good enough

Then how will I deal

Knowing I didn't save a human life

Those wounds may never heal

So continue to beg i will

And pray a little too

I wish there was some way

To help you make it through

© 2010 Jennifer Neuman

Author's Note

suicide is not the answer.

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TemperanceJoy

This really hit home for me as my best friend found out that I was thinking of committing suicide. She stopped me and her words were 'I couldn' t have lived with myself If I didn’t stop you' It is beautifully written and worded. OUTSTANDING.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Johnny A. Rojas

Hits home i lost a dear friend when i was young and 30 minutes before he jumped in front of the train he was in my room laughing and playing games....

"Knowing I didn't save a human life Those wounds may never heal"

they sure don't !!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Rose Tyler

No.. Suicide is never the answer you're right. "Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem" One of my friends wanted to commit suicide and almost succeeded. But I helped her through :] I know how this feels too. Good job on another excellent write!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Clockwork

The praying and the hoping do help, but getting help from those that love and trust the person is a good idea as well. Yes the words have been said before, but when they are assembled for a new person struggling with thoughts of suicide new meaning is encrypted within the words.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Jonathan Ballam

This feels to me like a collage of saying ripped out of a few motivational-type books.

Although it feels very fresh and original since you've employed a lovely rhythm and style here. Great Job!