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A Poem by Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff

I have this obsession.
Its the stupidest thing ever.
I have this obsession with this girl.
She's beautiful and smart and owns
the world.
She is so naive and small.
She doesn't try to impress anyone,
she doesn't try to prove herself to anyone.
She's perfect on every level.
But she won't see me.
she doesn't believe me.
I'm a stranger to her,
a freak,
a loser,
a creep.
I'm nobody to her,
but she's everything to me. 

© 2011 Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff

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I like this, kinda reminds me of the song creep by radiohead.

Posted 11 Years Ago

this is sweet(: I sincerely hope that she notices you

Posted 11 Years Ago

She sounds wonderful, I hope she notices your way with words one day!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Some woman can seem far away from us. You can be surprised sometime. People have a lot in common and don't try to find out. I like the desire and the purpose of this poem. Love from a distance can leave us wishing. Thank you for a excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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I love this.
It almost seems cliche, a boy chasing after a girl who wants nothing to do with him..
but, this is different at the same time. You recognize the situation for what it is.
It's honest and unbelievably real.
nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago

Awe this is sweet but sad ): good luck with her!(:

Posted 11 Years Ago

aww... its really sweet, and sad, depressing, but thats the best part. good luck with her C:

Posted 11 Years Ago

Interesting I likw it

Posted 11 Years Ago

Aww! How sweet and sort of depressing. But cute nonetheless.

Posted 11 Years Ago

So sweet.. But sad ): and I know the feeling, I've been on both sides of it
But the poem is really good, I kinda felt like I was watching movie in my head, and sad music plays while the boy is sitting on a bench thinking this while the girlie walks aqay. Yeah lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on November 19, 2011
Last Updated on November 19, 2011


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