A Poem by Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff

I'm not okay.
I'm not happy.
This is all an act.
On the inside I'm falling down,
brick by brick.
I'm starving,
I'm parched,
I need something to keep me going.
But I don't say this to anyone.
I keep it to myself,
at the bottom of my brain. 
I'm not okay.
But I will say I am,
until everything pours out of me.

© 2011 Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff

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I like it!(: it's reaaaaaaallllly relateable to most teens life, I use to do the same thing till it started to get to me then I started to cut but then my best friend found out. :) hehe boy was she PISSED but we made a pact to never cut again , we've stuck to it since(: try it or something similar it's amazing how much one person can effect your life, but only if you let the right one in(:
I'm always here to talk a's well incase it starts getting to you
I feeeeeeeeeeeeeel slow I thought thus dang movie was about paintball but they just blew crap 0.o


Posted 11 Years Ago

I can relate all too much. I'm here if you wanna talk.
This is really really good, broski.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Jeffrey, Jeffrey, Jeffrey...
You troubled little person.
I liked this a lot. I could relate too. Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on December 28, 2011
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Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff
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