Reflection

Reflection

A Poem by Inda

Waves arrive at the shore


Tired of such


   entanglement.


Your enamored stare;


   Like the moon


Stares at the sun.

 


In your hair you retain


   White sand and a sea flower.


You adorn my sight


  With a bright reflection.


and the ocean enraged,


      Mirrors our love. 

© 2017 Inda


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This is so beautiful and romantic...such tenderness..!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love how you play the sun and the moon and the waves together as a metaphor. well done


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

each line tells a story, I love the authenticity of this poem !

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is some beautiful writing, I really enjoyed this.

'In your hair you retain
White sand and a sea flower'

A beautiful line, you've made great use of vibrant imagery throughout which is necessary in shorter works. Well done, keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it and reviewed it. :)
Such a beautiful poem Inda!
The emotion, love was very well expressed and the imagery of the flowers and the sun/moon were amazing!
Well done, keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

3 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time means a lot.
Mr.Writer

3 Years Ago

No problem :)

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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